just to let you know, my mum thought it was good and thus shared it with my dad and my brother. BAD IDEA.
my brother came up with a parody poem talking about his addiction to computer games while my dad complained that my poem didn't rhyme and thus couldn't be considered a poem... =_=
Penang
a resonating warmth greets my toes,
as I splash tap water
to bathe my dusty feet.
as I wash,
the pail is beautiful
and familiar in my hands,
and it smiles at me.
in the house,
every room smells of memories,
blankets, and the spin of the fan,
soothing the simmering heat.
an ancient clock ticks
to sound the passing of an age,
that flew
without us knowing.
and as the house swells with
laughter and tears,
the hands of the clock
refuse to turn back,
and buy us a little more nighttime.
but no matter how fast,
or how cruelly, dawn comes,
the pitter-patter of feet,
and the crunch of a biscuit,
and the taste of burning incense
will not cease to resound,
upon the ceramic walls of my
lost childhood.
as I splash tap water
to bathe my dusty feet.
as I wash,
the pail is beautiful
and familiar in my hands,
and it smiles at me.
in the house,
every room smells of memories,
blankets, and the spin of the fan,
soothing the simmering heat.
an ancient clock ticks
to sound the passing of an age,
that flew
without us knowing.
and as the house swells with
laughter and tears,
the hands of the clock
refuse to turn back,
and buy us a little more nighttime.
but no matter how fast,
or how cruelly, dawn comes,
the pitter-patter of feet,
and the crunch of a biscuit,
and the taste of burning incense
will not cease to resound,
upon the ceramic walls of my
lost childhood.
3 comments:
LOL I like your brother coming up with another poem part xD
It was so mean of him!! T__T
yea i noe. oh well
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